♠ completed workshop ♠
Welcome to Writer's Ring Summer Workshop 2016! Here, you will have the opportunity to improve your writing over the course of 2 months. You will also be exposed to various levels of writers whom will give you feedback on yo...
Excellent job with the first assignment everyone! We must say, you all have immense talent in taking a few given points and turning them into story teasers!
It was really hard to narrow done to three people, but we have a winner!
WINNER:
mxnsterz - congratulations! You're entry was outstanding; so let's share it with everyone:
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What we liked about this entry: - The title gave a mysterious twist to the idea of the book. It was engaging. - Doesn't just talk about romance of a man and a woman; mentions family and friends. - And as for the twist... "Her planet comes back for her." Now that makes you want to read the book because of how far she's gone in exploring love, but then is taken away.
Now, we have two honourable mentions!
2ND PLACE:
judajudaas - congrats! We really loved your entry. It was hard to pick! Here is what the entry was:
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What we liked about this entry: - The title was nice; would suggest some more creativity. - Your synopsis' structure was very well done! You drew our attention without hesitations. - The relation of science and love was very creative! That comparison was something that would catch a reader's attention. - The last line draws mystification; well done!
3RD PLACE:
Fleeting_Dreams - congrats! We think that your entry definitely deserved a mention because of your unique qualities. Here is the entry!
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What we liked about this entry: - The Android idea was so creative! We haven't seen anything like this before. It's a good way of including the future artificial intelligence and love together; smart idea! - The title is very cute! Silicon Heart is a sensible title and definitely makes us want to read the book - great choice!
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NOTE: Want a personal critique on your entry? No problem! We'll critique your entry, just PM us and we'll do so as soon as we can!
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Strikes! Guys, if your name is here, please remember to finish off the assignment to keep things fair. Thanks!
Wow, that was such an amazing contest! We encourage everyone to check out the three users! Give them a follow, a shout-out, a PM, perhaps even a read onto their books as they're well deserved. Get out there and make friends!
Show them some love, and that love will come back to you.
Remember the brownie points we had mentioned some time ago? Well... Here it is, LOL!
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As for us? We'll be checking out the 3 users as well through our personal accounts ;) can't wait to post the next session soon!
