Look, I know I haven't updated in a while, and I'm not really planning on updating anytime soon either.... what I'm trying to say is that this book has a lot of flaws that dont add up with the plot of this story. If I'm going to show you my story, I'm going to have to do it right. And this just isn't. There's a lot of things I did in this book which led you believe something actually happened, like when Nightmare Shadai led Lucifer off to the woods, I actually didn't know what to do with that... And the whole Jessica thing at the prologue? I actually have no idea what that was all about.
what I will do though is sort out everything and rewrite this, but a lot different. I won't be unpublishing this like I did with the rest of my books ( apart from one which mysteriously deleted ).
So that's all I have to say. Sorry?
Anyways, here's what was going to be the next chapter-
2 hours later
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Lucifer's POV
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"We're nearly there," said Shile in her wolf form, sniffing at the air. Kaitlyn frowned in confusion. Shile rolled her eyes but smiled.
"But we still have lots of time... Why don't they just give us... I don't know.. 12 hours.? That'd be-"
"Kaity, Kaity, my dear Kaity," Tristan intervened, in his 'charming' way.
"The reason they 'give us' 24 hours is because
" 1- normally the powerless, dying being is alone whilst trying to find the flower,
"2- the flower is supposed to hard for the lone being to find and leading to
"3- they are not accompanied by a wolf, demon, angel and shadow who protect them, leading them to die."
"O-oh.. Why are you protecting me?"
"Isn't it obvious? Prophecy."
"Right... But how do you know we're nearly there..?"
Much to Kaitlyn's surprise, even mine, the next sound she heard was the same thing coming from all four of us.
"Because I can sense it."
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Kaitlyn's POV
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"Because I can sense it," they all said in unison. In that moment, their eyes became dull and even threatening. Their voices were in the same monotone before my vision became bleary and finally black.
I could feel my head colliding with the ground onto something hard, perhaps a rock or tree trunk.
I could still hear their voices, but I could not move. I didn't think I was unconscious, maybe it was some sort of paralysis, though I wasn't even able to see. This isn't even finished....
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The Last Immortal: Anime ( complete / cancelled )
SpiritualThe shadow soul is getting weaker. People seem to have much less powers than back in the older days. He'll need an immortal to survive, but there hasn't been one in aeons. Then his slave, Nightmare Shadai finds one. He takes her power but after cent...
