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EIGHT|Orbs

Orbs

Orbs

Orbs

Orbs

No matter how you say it, orbs will always be a cringe-worthy. What I want to know is why these so-called authors write "I looked into her big ORBS". Are you a seer or something?

Unfortunately for you, you must not be able to see your future failures in describing eyes.

But seriously though, do you tell a person, "Hi girl/dude, you have nice orbs"? Or do you tell him/her "Hi, I like your green eyes"? You'll sound pretty weird (not in a good way) if you tell somebody they have nice orbs.

I'm currently reading this semi-amazing story where the author uses the word "orbs" every few seconds. It pained me to read it, so I stopped halfway through the book. Not everybody is like me, but I know that many people can't stand the word "orbs", when used to describe eyes.

So yeah, don't use such the word "orbs" in your writing. It doesn't make your writing deep, and neither does it make you a better writer. If you want to describe eyes, talk about how dark your character's eye bags are, or even describe their widened, fearful eyes. What does the word "orbs" say about a character? The only insight you gain from reading about a character's "orbs" is little.

Gracias👋🏻
-marIene_mckInnon