My Parents My Patients - DC Next Generation

Chapter Nine

About ten minutes later,I got up and made my way down to my next patient's cell,I scanned my card and walked in. I was greeted with a fireball wizing past my head. "You're the second person to do that to me today Chato."I said,a playful smirk playing across my mouth. "Sorry Doc. Thought you were that Arkham guy."he said.
"So how was your holidays?"I asked spotting a chair,I walked over and sat on it. "Boring. I was stuck in the hell hole."he answered. "Okay. Well I prefer not to talk about mine."I said,"You know what,we never got to talking about your past,last year. Just trivial things."
"You really want to hear about my past?"he asked,staring at me. I was a little dizzy,but that always happened in my sessions with Chato. I nod eagerly,today my dizziness is worse though. "Are you sure doc? You don't look well."He said,"wouldn't want people thinking I killed a doctor,one of Arkham's best at that."I shook my head,"Just a little light headed."I said,smiling. "Doc,you should ask that Arkham guy to take you off as my doctor. I've noticed that you're always a bit off when you come in here. Why would that be?"he asked. "Hey,this is meant to be about you,not me."I said,"But if it would make you feel better,its probably because I have an elemental power. Now please tell me about your past and I promise to go to Dr Arkham and ask them to put a different doctor on you."
"Okay doc. I'll be nice. Once I was a ruthless and powerful street gang leader in Los Angeles. After a rival gang sold drug on my land and they refused to give me any of the profit,I attacked them at their homes. I set the building on fire,I still regret it to this day,because when I went inside to see if they had escaped or not,I found that I had killed an innocent woman and her child. In my distraught state,I turned myself in and sent to jail."he said,"that's my story."
I nodded,"Thank you Chato,maybe I'll see you again some time."I said,standing up. The room started to spin around me and I started to see black spots,next thing I knew I hit the floor and blacked out.

El Diablo's P.O.V
I watched her fall the the ground and not get up. I quickly jumped up and knelt down next to her,I put two fingers to her neck and heard sizzling. I quickly removed my finger and saw a small burn on her next. "Fuck."I said walking over to my door,I bang on the door,"Hey!"I call,banging on the door. That guard came to the door,"What seems to be the problem,where is Dr Quinzel?"the guard asked,looking around through the small glass window. "That's what I called you for stupid,she passed out. She's out cold and her condition is getting worse,please unlock the door so that I can get her out of here before she dies."I pleaded. "Ha. You think I'd fall for that,I'm not fool. Now where is the doctor hot head?"the guard said,trying to see further into the room. "I told you,she's...." I was interrupted by a loud buzzing sound. "Yes,sir. This is Officer Tiggs. Open the door,sir are you sure,he is potentially dangerous. Okay,fine. " the guard said into a  walkie-talkie. The guard put it away,"I'm going to open this door,do not try to escape or harm me."she said,scanning her card. I ran over and picked Dr Quinzel up,the door opened and I took her outside. The guard looked at me,"If you would so kindly go back into your cell sir. I can handle her from here."she said. I nodded walking back into my cell,the guard closed the door and I was refrained to watch through the glass window. The guard checked Dr Quinzel's pulse,her reaction was a horrible sight,she quickly grabbed the walkie-talkie and called for back up. Some other people showed up and carried Dr Quinzel away. "I hope she'll be alright."I muttered walking away from the door.

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