One More Chance (Naruto Fanfic) (SasukeXSakura) (COMPLETE!)

Chapter 20

Chapter 20

dedicated 2 XxMiyuxX 4 being a kind fan/commented/voter! Now that this strys coming 2 an end, I'll be dedicated chaps 2 every1 who has been supporting it!

-< short n bad, I kno. I duno how, but for sum weird reason the last chap got 22 votes so I had 2 upload! Uhhhhhhh 15 votes till da nxt chap? We managed 2 surpass it last time but I gotta feeling we wont this time!

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"Now then." Madara said, smirking. "Let's begin."

His words hardly had a chance to register in Sakura's mind though as it started.

"You will only do as my voice commands!" he said sharply, tone hard and demanding. His words echoed, but unlike an echoed which faded quickly and got quieter and quieter, this echo was long and only got louder.

His words were deafening, and Sakura could hardly think. They even began repeating in her mind and she had not another thought besides "You will only do as my voice commands!"

Madara's voice repeated this over and over again for a couple of minutes until they were etched into her mind before continuing. "Once reunited with your comrades, you will act as you always do!" he told her next, this next command even louder and drowning out the other echo.

Sakura had stopped squirming. She sat unmoving in her seat, her green eyes not even blinking. They were blank and only stared strait ahead into Madara's eyes. Her mind was completely barren except for what Madara was telling her.

The way this worked was, since this 24 hour world that the Mangekyou Sharingan creates made the user control everything happening, he forced her to be looking at his Sharingan. He did this by creating the entire background his Sharingan. Then he gave her demands, drilling them into her head so she wont forget and making it so loud no other thought could reach her mind besides what she heard from him.

But, what made this different from the regular Mangekyou Sharingan was that it was longer in the real world than a second. That was because when it was used for memories or torture, it was all either being played or just happening over and over again.

Put more simple, memories either came from him or his victims so it was easy for him to do that. It took little effort because it required no effort for him. And, for torturing people, it was just stabbing over and over again. This also required no energy.

But, for hypnotism, it was all different. Different orders, different actions. He couldn't go on autopilot. He had to put time and energy into it so it would be full proof. If he tried putting someone under hypnotism in one second, it probably wouldn't work.

So this would take an hour or two in the real world until it would be completely finished.

(make seems? Even I don't get it!)

"But, when you enter the village, you will do everything I say!"

The 4 coma'd Sharingan spun, the world stayed completely immobile. The table disappeared and the chair underneath Sakura was suddenly gone. Suddenly, she was floating in midair. All the Sharingan's combined into one huge one, taking the spot of where Madara was sitting. Sakura stared at it, unable to do anything else. She was in an unbreakable trance. The only thing that would snap her out of it would be someone moving her body while she was on his hypnotism jutsu.

Now, this was where it would really begin. Madara prepared himself for each careful instruction, making sure the were no flaws in his directions.

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*drip* *drip* *drip*

That was the only sound heard, besides their footsteps, as they walked into the Akatsuki cave. Having no idea about the place, they were at a total disadvantage. Any Akatsuki member could pop put any second and attack, and none of them could do a single thing to prevent it.