If any of you readers have suggestions I will gladly take them into consideration. Also if you want me to add or take away anything from this I can. This is the first story I have ever wrote so help me out please. Tell me what I do right and wrong in the story so I can edit and make it better. I will read over my story and check myself for errors and such but if you could point out changes that need to be made that would be great thanks. Comment or message me about anything I can do for this.
Enjoy or don't enjoy ~Lizzie~
