Ok so another review!
Real Name: mymy Redman Hansen
Wut?Creepypasta Name: mymy gone sane/the meme
Ok. That's newCatchphrase: awww you don't think I'm funny?! HAHAHAHA! No...
Age: 17 (died at 10)
OkRace: African American (ghost)
Boo! I'm a ghost!Gender: female
OkDisorder: ADD (I don't know ;-😉
OH HELL NO DONT YOU F*CKING DARE PUT A DISORDER AND idk NEXT TO ITWeapons: gun/sledgehammer
Ok coolReason for killing: revenge/pleasure
Okkkkkkk1. SPELLING(lol jk) 2. just pm me if you want help ^^
Ok
Personality: witty,outgoing, disability, impolite
WTF DISABILITY?!?! NOPE NOPE NOPEStrength: family, weapons, training,
OkWeaknesses: someone taking her family and kfc...
KFC? Wtf?Ok, maybe a little much, maybe tone it down a bit
WTF?!!!! DON'T TAKE RAPE SO EASILY!!! THAT CAN BE VERY TRAUMATIZING FOR PEOPLE AND CAN SCAR PEOPLE FOR LIFE!
Ok so first, sorry if I was rude. Ok so this one has a LOT of rough spots and has a lot of work to do. DONT PUT DOWN A DISORDER FOR THE HECK OF IT. I don't see ANY signs that they actually have ADD! They don't have to have a disorder! AND DONT USE RAPE SO EASILY!!! People can get VERY offended by disorders done wrong and stuff like rape done wrong! What I have to say is, RESEARCH RESEARCH RESEARCH!!!!
OC rating: 1/10
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