Ok I am SO sorry to the creator of this OC I didn't see your form entry at first 😅 PS guys, can you try to avoid posting entries on my message board unless you have to? I don't check it often ok?
Real Name: Isabel sorto Reyna
Cool name!It's not bad! At least its original and kinda makes sense!
Catchphrase(if any): ahahaha hell no
WHO NEEDS THEM HAHAHAAge: 27
Yes! And adult!Race: half Mexican half El Salvadoran
Ok! Nice!Gender: female but is bisexual
Same!Disorders(if any): CIPA
So she can't feel pain, ok!Weapon: pistol
Bang bang!Reason for killing: revenge
REVENGEKilling method: stalks her prey for a month to haunt them then she shoots them in the right eye then in the head after she's let them suffer
Well then 0-0Looks: pixie cut brown hair blind eye is faded but her eye is brown
Nice!Ok, that's kinda cute that she wears his clothes
Personality: (not in form)
Oh wellGood backstory!
*shot is supposed to be there instead of shit*
Strengths: smart, good aiming
That's why she can hit the eye!Weaknesses: children, military people, hand to hand combat
Makes senseSpeed 5/10
Stealth 7/10
Strength 3/10
Stamina 7/10
Smarts 8/10
Not badExtra/anything I missed: (not in form)
Ok, great OC! I love it! I can see where you get the name! It like she stalks them, and with her stealth it's like she's a ghost! And I love how you showed that she still has her humanity and how she loved her husband! Especially with her wearing her dead husbands clothes like it's the last memory she has of him. I mean, this OC is realistic and amazing! And lemme guess, her personality would be kinda like vengeful but nice towards kids and stuff like that.
OC Rating: 8/10!
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