Hey guys, I was wondering if you guys would like me to review one of my OCs or maybe I could put out a form and you guys could review it! (Tries to convince self that my OCs are amazing) If you're interested just comment!
Real Name: Hayden Maddox Interesting name
Creepypasta Name: Scorch Cool!
Catchphrase(if any): ... (she's a selective mute) Ok!
Age: 21 Another adult!
Race: African American Cool! Haven't seen many of these!
Gender: female Ok
Disorders(if any): N/A DONT NEED THEM
Weapon: a metal baseball bat Good weapon
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Good.
Clothes: Left along with her sister in a black tank top, jeans, and black shoes Eyy, she has a match!
Personality: Athletic, easy to annoy, usually calm That's sounds good!
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That is a great backstory! Trying to find the family they have and trying not to lose them!
Strengths: agility and stamina Good! She's an athlete!
Weaknesses: (not in form)
Speed 7/10
Stealth 4/10
Strength 4/10
Stamina 8/10
Smarts 6/10 Kinda Makes sense
Extra/anything I missed: (not in form)
Ok, so overall good OC! She's realistic, great, and I'd say she's ready for a story! You may want to add some weaknesses though, and maybe bump up her strength a point because she's an athlete, especially if she uses a bat for a weapon
