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*takes a deep breath* it's horror…
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Author: MrCrowley667
First impressions: 9
The cover really gives off that creepy vibe and prepares the reader for what's coming. However, the medal is a little distracting from the rest of the cover and it's frankly a little hard to read the title on the cover due to some what small print
Description: 8
The description is short and to the point, it gives the reader enough information to make them intrigued and want to read further. But, there are spelling errors, however they are small, the author accidentally put capitals in the middle of the sentence. They also seemed a tad bit repetitive with a section saying "... Hell is impatient, Hell is coming to him"
The story itself: 8
The story is nicely worded, but the author has over used semi colons and I did notice more than a few typos and misplaced words. The author did a rather well job of describing things and keeping everything in order, I didn't become confused once the entire time. I personally think the book is properly categorized as horror and fills the expectations that the class requires. It also seemed that each section I read (though I only read 4) was under editing and maintenance, although it is good to edit and tweak your work you shouldn't be releasing flawed content, it will deter some readers
Overall total: 8.5
The story is nicely done, aside from the over use and misuse of some punctuations, I would certainly say it's a good book. If you enjoy horror and are fine with swearing, which is present, then I would suggest this book
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