Author: AustendeHaay
First Impressions: 10
The cover and title are wonderful, both would be able to draw in readers on their own and I know that as soon as I saw it I got the feel of a great adventure and I immediately wanted to look inside and read more
Description: 10
The description is very well written, not a single spelling error or misplaced word. It gives the reader a good grasp of what will happen without revealing too much of the story
The story itself: 8
The story was cleanly written, I can tell the author put lots of work into it. However, the chapters seemed very long (consuming most of my day due to my slow reading speed) and I feel as though it would be wise to split each chapter into parts or sub chapters, have 2, 3, or even 4 parts so that way the reader is not overwhelmed. I also spotted some small spelling errors and misplaced words, these were few and far between however
Overall total: 9
No story written by humans is without flaw, unfortunately, but with that said. The story was very good, with fine details and an interesting way of describing the characters, it really helps the reader to envision each one. The story contains swearing, blood, violence, and mention of... adult activities, if you have some free time and are looking for a good adventure book then I would suggest this one for you
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