Author: midnight_misfit
First Impressions: 9
The cover is nicely made and the title fits with the story almost flawlessly, the only problem I spot though is that the top of the cover is slightly cluttered, which causes the print to be tiny which in turn makes it hard to read on small devices
Description: 8
The description is cleanly written aside from one grammatical error that I spotted which is "she begins a routine to record all of her memories down" by simply removing the word down this can be fixed. The description is also somewhat depressing, which will scare off some readers
The story itself: 7
As the author acknowledged the idea is clichèd, but they do a nice job of making it their own. The story conveys emotion well and paints a nice picture for the reader to imagine everything better. I did see that some words were used twice in a row and occasionally there were words that should not have been used
Overall total: 8
The author certainly has skill and can go places with this idea. However they appear to need to improve their typing skills, aside from that they have done a very nice job of capturing the emotions needed for such a story
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