First Impressions: 9
The title and cover are nicely made, the title gives the feel that this story may bring up some emotions, if at least make you smile or cry at some parts. The reason this section doesn't get a ten is because some readers don't want an emotion provoking story, however this is okay because we as authors are not here to cram things down the readers throat
Description: 8
The description is clean, with no spelling errors or misplaced words. However, it was a little simple and seemed a tad clichèd, aside from those factors it was an acceptable length for most readers and gave a good view of what is to come in the story
The story itself: 7
The story was certainly something I haven't heard of before, it was an interesting idea and I think the author definitely has skill, but, I did notice more than a few missing words and occasionally a misspelling, I also felt as though the way everything was executed seemed a tad clichèd. It was also from a first person perspective which some readers find a little annoying
Overall total: 8
The idea is intriguing and I do not mean to discourage a growing writer, but when I read the story I got the sense that this style has been done before, my suggestion to the author is to keep practicing and writing, you only become better with time. Also it helps to proof read, it takes a little more effort but it pays off
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