Honest Book Reviews

Randomest (review)

Author: 1Dhnlzl23

First Impressions: 9
Both the cover and the title give off a happy vibe, which will draw in most readers. However the quote on the cover is in rather tiny print, making it much harder to read on small devices

Description: 3
Instead of a description the author used a quote, it is a good quote but the reader gets no information about the book, which will deter a lot of readers. The readers want to know what to expect and what they may find inside the book

The story itself: 5
The story was alright, however I did notice more than a few typos. The story became rather confusing very fast, I wasn't really sure what was happening until I had reread the chapter. The author has a good idea but they seem to be taking on too much, trying to put all genres in one book is extremely difficult and usually can only be done when someone has lots of skill

Overall total: 7
It's certainly a good idea, but the author seems to have bitten off more than they can chew, with some simple practice and shedding off some ambitions for the book I think the author would be able to do this later on in a different book. Overall the author does have skill but has quite simply taken on a challenge that's a little too big