Author: TheCutester24
First impressions: 8
The cover is cute, with an adorable dog and easy to read text. But the middle of it seems rather barren, empty in simple terms. Aside from that problem the rest is rather good, the title will surely make dog lovers come look inside
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The story itself: 5
The story was nice, a good idea, however each chapter was very short with several spelling errors and mispuncuations. The author also made small comments in the middle of the story, this is often a red light in the writing world
Overall total: 6
The story can be good, but at it's current stage it's a little... weak. I suggest the author takes more time to practice and perfect there skills, and when explaining something always do so before or after the chapter starts/stops
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