Light and Dark Chronicles (Book 2) Pokemon Chronicles Series

Jenny's Reaction to chapter 30 (well half of ch. 30)

So my best friend Jenny my beta reader meaning that she proofreads my work before it's published she is always the first one to read my Fanfictions before they're published ^.^ so she wanted me to post her reactions to things said in the story so yeah this is for humor and for laughs 😂 so when Jenny read this this was on Friday so she didn't read the finished product yet so I'll be sure to post the other half of this later! 😂 You guys should've seen her facial expressions 😂😂😂

"He's right you know! You should've let Jonathan, Silver, Iona and I handle it but did you listen to us, NO! You went off on you're own and chased him anyway!" Said Paul.
-Jenny: Preach Paul!

I'm surprised that you're here Silas." Said Guzma.
-Jenny: Me too Guzma.... Me too...

You're my uncle and you're the only one in our family who isn't crazy! I know you cared about us just like our mother did until she died. Dad started locking himself in the basement fiddling with machines and he started drinking a lot. He went insane after spending hours in the dark basement fiddling with machines. He lost all reason. I was five years old at the time. I remember you took Aracel and left us behind. He didn't even try to do anything yet but he mentioned something to Aracel and I know that you didn't like it. I didn't either I told you to take her and leave us behind. You wanted to take all of us but I told you to only take Aracel and that the rest of us would be fine. Then three years they all ran off by themselves and followed different paths. Most of them were very dark paths. Trinity's in particular was the darkest. She chose to follow Ghetsis. I'm not sure what happened to Trinity. I don't remember is she was arrested or if she escaped being arrested fluke the other team plasma members. When Lana was seven she ran away and snuck on a boat and the boat crashed and she fell into the ocean, she got washed up in the ocean and ended up Hoen with barely any memories of us until just recently when Archie and Shelly told her that she was adopted. My little sister and I stayed behind hoping that maybe that this was a phase and that maybe things would get better. Carmella was five and I was eight years old at the time and I was dead wrong. We should've left. Dad was crazy and he was never coming back. He never recovered his sanity unless mom somehow miraculously returned but we all knew that she had died. We all knew it! Dad then started becoming verbally abusive and he hit me on several occasions blaming everything on me. He babied Carmella and even favored her over me. Then when I was fourteen and he formed team Galatic and forced me and Carmella to join. I told Carmella to run away and start her Pokemon and journey and when team galactic was over thrown that I would meet her in a safe spot. Luckily ash and his friends stopped Team Galactic the first time along with Cynthia. Cynthia even helped me escape but then things changed after Aracel took her title but that's beside the point. Then I met with Carmella in Unova and we settled down here in Coordeleena. I was afraid to return to Snowpoint City. I had a feeling that Cyrus wasn't dead! People may have thought he died but in reality he escaped to the distortion world. Then he escaped and reformed team galactic. Then I heard about Lillian saving the day and beating Cyrus. I heard about my father's death and honestly I didn't cry when I had heard he died. I was just happy that he would never be able to hurt us again."
-Jenny: Can I hug Silas now... 😢

"Where's Carmella? You mentioned you had another sister. So where is she?" I asked.
  Lusamine and Silas looked at each other and then Silas looked back at me.
"She is on her Pokemon Journey."
Said Silas.
  I had a feeling that he was lying to me. Lusamine knew something too. I could tell.
-Jenny: Do I trust Lusamine? Nope! Do I trust Silas? Eh... He's not a bad character I actually want to give him a hug!

"Okay well Guzma they said that you can leave now. We were invited to a fancy dinner and we are going to a fancy resteraunt which requires you to dress up. We have to leave now so we can ready to leave." I said.
-Jenny: I can already foresee this as a problem for some of the characters 😂

"So wait before we leave let me get this straight so Cynthia is actually Lucile's daughter. Am I no longer responsible for her?"
Asked Guzma.
Jenny: Since when is Guzma ever responsible?! 😂😄

"You are until tomorrow when Lucile is discharged from the hospital." I said.
"I didn't even have her for more than two days!" Whined Guzma.
-Jenny: Aw Guzma!!!

"They're not going back to Alola their moving with us and speaking of that we need you to help us out with rooming. you're house is huge you think you could take on letting people stay at your house?"
I asked."
"Yes." Said Guzma.
"Okay so would you mind letting dawn, Rj, Alec, VG, Misty, Gary, Barry, and Now Silas moving in?"
I asked.
"Wait Silas you're moving in?!"
Asked Guzma.
"Surprise."
Said Silas.
"Okay that's a lot of people."
Said Guzma.
-Jenny: No kidding Guzma?! 😂

"Okay so now the rooms are different at the Shingi house now. Brandon is texting me the rooms. May and Drew are leaving so here are the room arrangements. So Paul is rooming with Gold, Silver, Luke, Gladion, and Ash. Alain you're rooming with, Luke, Hayden, Clemont, and Conway. So the boys rooms are done I sent the text messages to everyone that isn't with us at the hospital. Okay so here are the girls room arrangements. So in my room there's Serena, Hazel, Mina, Lei, and Lexie. In the other rooms it's Lusamine, Kanaii, Lillie, Cynthia, Iona, and Selene. Any complaints?" I asked.
"Yes! I have major one! I'm rooming with Conway!"
Shouted Alain.
"Quit complaining it could be worse!" Said Paul.
"I'm just happy that I don't have to room with Conway." Said Gladion happily.
"But you're rooming with Gold."
Said Mina.
"Darn it!" Shouted Gladion.
-Jenny: Oh Gladion 😂😂😂

"So Brandon said no complaints! Bonnie and Max have their own rooms now and there's an extra room open but that is strictly for guests and the Adults rooms are in a hallway down stairs while everyone else's rooms are upstairs. and uncle Brandon said no complaining about the rooms! He doesn't want to hear it and neither do I! I am only relaying the information I got from a text message!"
I said.
"Why do they get their own rooms?!"
Whined Gold.
"Because they are children Gold!"
Said Paul.
"Oh yeah..."
Said Gold.
-Jenny: I love gold 😂😂😂

"I don't blame him for thinking you're not responsible."
Said Aracel.
-Jenny: Preach Aracel 😂

"I am responsible!"
Said Guzma.
"Really because I beg to differ!"
Said Plumeria.
"I'm not that bad!"
said Guzma,
-Jenny: Man Plumeria is roasting Guzma 😂😂😂

"You fell down a flight of stairs Guzma!"
Shouted Plumeria.
-Jenny: She does have a valid point 😂

"Well Hazel doesn't trust Guzma to take care of her." I said while giggling.
-Jenny: 😂😂😂

"Seriously do none of you trust me?!" Shouted Guzma.
-Jenny: This is just perfect👌😂