Okay, so I'm going to start giving tips for your story.
So I'm going to start by giving tips for writing boyxboy stories. I don't ship any of them but I do read them and I do respect anyone who does ship them because it's what they believe in. Although I have to admit that some of the boyxboy stories that I have read are very good.
And some arent so.......good.......
That being said, I want to thank @uniquelyxlarry for commenting so much, I really appreciate it.
Anyway to the tips!
-First of all, let me tell you the "norm" for writing boyxboy fanfiction.
They are in the band together and suddenly realize that they love each other more than a friend.
*And Zero people clap for that crappy (oops meant creative) idea*
Or......
One of the boys has always been desperately in love with another but is too scared to tell him his feelings.
*-1 people clap for that brilliant idea. How did you come up with that?*
*cough* copycat *cough*
Be CREATIVE
-Okay, let me get this straight you carrots.
1. Louis is spelled L-O-U-I-S, not louie or lewie. And how long have you been in this fandom? A whole three seconds? Oh, that's great. The Wanted fandom always needs more fans.....
2. Louis is 22, not 5. So, last time I checked, even immature 22 year olds do not randomly scream "CARROTS!"
This goes for all of the boys.
3. Liam may be slightly afraid of spoons, but he certainly does not go cowering in fear whenever he sees one.
I'm afraid of snakes, but I would not scream at the top of my lungs and do fifty laps around the house when my uncle says that he saw one. Just saying.
And by the way I really do have a fear of snakes. Maybe I should do that thing where I tell you about myself......maybe next time.
4. Just because Harry likes cats, it does not mean he loves them. So please. He is a 19 year old guy(though not for long *sniffle* *grabs tissue* *starts crying uncontrollably* *starts screaming "My baby...."* *reminds myself that I am very weird and should get back to writing*), not some creepy cat lady who gags up furballs when having tea. Just saying. (Didn't mean to offend anyone. A lot of old ladies who own 4 cats or more are very nice.)
-It's always fun to surprise the reader. Element of surprise peeps. Throw 5sos into your story.
And if you don't know who 5sos are, then you can exit this story, go on youtube, and fall in love with the little rays of sunshine.....now.
-Try out different ships. I love stories about Larry Stylinson. Really. But my favorite ship is Lilo. And there is only like....2 books with lilo.
That makes me sad cuz Louis and Liam are too cute to be true. *stares at posters....."Aren't you?"*
So this was either a tip or me begging you to write a lilo story........still can't decide which. Oh well. Just make sure that there aren't any carrots in there......
Anyway. This is the end of this part for now. Until then, see ya.
Calum:BYE
Me: What o.O
Calum: Make sure to comment too!!!
Me: OMG *DIES*
