The Jasper

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Yeah I know you didn't ask for this, but i'm gonna do it anyway.
Hehe😳

The Jasper           by: @AshlynnCrow

Cover: 10/10
You can see that it's a fantasy book and I really like how you made your text look like. One thing you could do better:
the color of the stone could have been darker because you wrote in the book that it was almost black.

Idea: 9/10
I like the idea very much but I have read some similar (almost) books, but you have done it very good and you have a almost logical explanation in everything in the book (even if it's fantasy hehe..)

Your writing: 10/10
Wow! I can almost see it in front of me. (And thats very rare)
You do deserve 10 point on this

Book name: 10/10
First I tought 8 or 9 but when I tried to come with something better... Well, lets just say it didn't went so good.. So you deserves every point in here.

The text before: 7/10
I understand what the book is about so that's good but I would like a little longer text. That's was the only "bad" thing.

46/50

Wow! Just wow..

You go grrrl, or boy ofc❤❤!!!

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