Snag Reads Her Old Fanfiction

Chapter 8- Broken Promises

Embersoar stretched her aching muscles.
Again

Great Skypride, that was some real training! Embersoar was lucky that somehow, the dead could sleep!
Is this another filler or what

As she settled down for a long nap, she heard a voice.

"Embersoar?"

Dragonclaw!
It's your boyfriend

"Embersoar, move your tail!"
And his scary father

Thornstar...

"What is it?" Embersoar meowed as she stumbled sleepely out of her makeshift den. "Are rabbits flying around?"
Wait what?

"Actually," Thornstar growled. "A cat is."
Wait WHAT?

"Flying cats?" Embersoar snorted in disbelief. "Oh, yeah! Did you hear the news? Rabbits are flying now, too!"
As you've stated already

"Embersoar," Dragonclaw growled. "Follow us."
"We have candy."

Thornstar lead them into a clearing about ten tail-lengths around. It was less soggy than the others, but much more erie and quiet. Trees pressed around them at all sides so tight, it was difficult to breathe.
Skypride sure is great, isn't it, Embers?"

"Know what's funny about that sarcastic comment you made back there?" Thornstar snarled. "There is a living cat who has been granted wings by Skypride."
You just blew ur cover m8

"Isn't this Skypride?" Embersoar asked, confused.
Omg she finally took a hint!

Thornstar started laughing. "Of course not!" He yowled in amusement. "What makes you think were so beautiful and so good?"
Exactly. Embers.

Embersoar stood there like a mouse-brained idiot.
Well you are both of those things so I don't blame you.

This isn't Skypride? Dragonclaw lied to me?
Ding ding ding

Embersoar whipped her head around to look at Dragonclaw, who was staring at her in desperation.
What? He has emotions? Real emotions?

Oh, how she hated him!
Well that opinion changed quickly.

The hurt he caused her was nearly unbearable... and when those feeling collided...
"Oh no he lied to me about where I was. Time to sink into a stone cold rage depression and hate everything for the rest of my life."

Embersoar narrowed her eyes and looked away.

I'm evil... Then so be it!
And you're... accepting this?

Embersoar stared into Thornstar's eyes.

"What did you bring me here for?"

Dragonclaw's POV

Ooh changing things up

"What makes you think this is Skypride?" Thornstar laughed. "What makes you think we're so beautiful and so good?

Embersoar's gonna kill me...
Y o u  t r a i n e d  h e r

Embersoar just sat there, looking dumbstruck.

Dragonclaw stared at her desperately.

But, you're good and beautiful, Embersoar!
Hold up

As he stared at her, he willed her to believe it.

She whipped her head around to face him.

Those eyes... he would never forget how full of hatred and hurt they were... Like a fire of death, they were practically screaming at him. I hate you! What have you done?
Again he lied about where u were

Embersoar looked away.

"Why have you brought me here?" Her words dripped with poison.

I have broken her...

But I like her...
Wait excuse me?

I love her...
You have to be kidding
This is the worst romance thing in the history of Warriors