Snag Reads Her Old Fanfiction

Chapter 8- The New Arrivals

Embersoar opened her itchy orange eyes to find the dark ugliness of Lavapride... Also... Amberscar?
OOOHHHH EMBERS YOU-

Embersoar sat up stiffly as she recalled what had happened. Silverteeth's safe!
WHAT DID YOU DO

Amberscar lifted his ruffled head to glance at her with his striking amber eyes. "Good mo- uh, day, night, whatever. Hi, Embersoar."
AHAHA IM SO UNCOMFORTABLE

Embersoar giggled, then instantly stopped, suddenly in a bad mood. The trees rustled awkwardly in the silence that stretched on between them. Everything was dark and smelly, just as normal, and she hated it here. Everything was just awful. She wanted to fight someone, kill someone. She wanted to cause something...bad... evil.
Why can I relate so much and also EMBERS YOU STILL NEED TO EXPLAIN

"Amberscar, why are we in this stupid tree?" Embersoar grumbled, glaring at him, her glowing orange eyes reflecting the trees behind him. "Did you have to pick this one? It's damp as a bog, and has so many thorns, we were practically sleeping on a hedgehog."
Rood

Amberscar stared at her wide eyed, confused. "Uhh, first of all, i didn't pick this tree, you did." He growled, a little shocked. "And second of all, all of these trees are almost exactly the same."
Ahaha rekt

"Hmmph." Embersoar grunted, looking away, glancing at the squishy bushes below. "I hear there are new arrivals comming soon."
Wait, how would she know this?

Amberscar nodded, mistified.
Is that spelled correctly? Mystified.. no it's not. Swagpi why

"Why are you just standing there like a stunned fawn, then? Let's go!" Embersoar yowled at him, irritated. She then took wing, leaving him stunned, on the soggy tree branch.
Chill Embers.

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~Dragonclaw's POV~

Dragonclaw sat at the edge of the Clearing of Arrivals, his icy gaze boring into the mushy dark grass. Someone was coming.
Oh hello. Embers found a new boyfriend.

The dark, damp grass began to emit a deep purple glow, getting more and more intense by the heartbeat. Skypride had denied some cat. Lavapride always accepted what Skypride threw away.
That makes you sound almost... nice?

Two deep purple silhouettes of cats began to form out of the mystic mist that surrounded them.
I'm beginning to notice a theme with the purple.

Then their colour began to gradually fade into view.

The one on the right was a broad-shouldered white calico tom with brown and garbage green splotches and sky blue eyes. Hmm. A calico tom. That's super rare.
G A R B A G E G R E E N I M D E D

The one on the left was a tall skinny white she-cat with jet black tiger stripes and dark blue eyes.
Nyello somewhat realistic cat

Hmm. Two arrivals in one ceremony? This is about as rare as that calico tom!

It took the she-cat about five heartbeats to figure out where she was. "Oh, no..." She quietly wailed.
You're surprised...?

The tom stood there shocked, then realization came into his clear blue eyes. "Oh, great Skypride..."
You have to had done something horrible to be here. Why are you surprised?

"Welcome to Lavapride." Dragonclaw mewed, stepping out of the mushy bush with his head slightly raised, and his claws unseathed, to appear strong.
Because everyone knows he couldn't fight a blind pigeon.

The she-cat's fur puffed up so she looked twice her size. "Get away from me!" She screeched in fear, her paws were shaking.
Just run?

The tom whimpered something inaudible, his black pupils becoming slits.
He spooped

"Ah, I see you don't like your new home," Dragonclaw growled, taking another step forward, making the she-cat flinch. "Can I at least learn your names?"
May I. Dragon please use your correct grammar.

The calico tom's head shot up, his sky blue gaze boring into Dragonclaw. "Why do you need to know?"
Because why not

Dragonclaw grinned. "Because we will have to destroy your spirit if you don't tell us."
Or that. That's a good reason too.

This made the she-cat yowl in fear and slide out her gleaming claws. The tom's eyes widened and he took a step back.
Haha they believe him

This is fun, Dragonclaw thought, snickering. These cats are such mouse-brains.
True

"I-I'm Spiritfeather." the white she cat mewed, shivering.
Nyello irrelevant character 1

"I'm Skyshadow," The calico tom mewed, his voice cracking.
Nyello irrelevant character 2

"Well," Dragonclaw grunted, retracting his claws and padding towards the two stunned arrivals. "Welcome to Lavapride."
You've said that already..?

A/N: First of all, sorry for not updating often! I really try, guys! Second of all, Skyshadow and Spiritfeather were applied by @Sokkio and @IsaacWolfe! (Spiritfeather is Sokkio's OC and Skyshadow is IsaacWolfe's OC) Also, I would like to give a shoutout to @Silverteeth and @Mapleheart123 as they are some pretty swaggy people :D So, sorry guys! I'll try to stop doing these annoying A/N's... they're not fun to write... :(
Stay Swaggy,
~Swagtastic98

Good because they're not fun to read, either.