THE LITTLE DEMENTOR @Pinkstripedzebra

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The little dementor by PinkStripedzebra

GRACE'S REVIEW

Just starting off, giving dementors a personality and having them show emotion is such a unique idea that I've never really seen touched up on in the fandom so it was really cool to see as I'd never really imagined dementors to have feelings, although I'd been curious about them ever since it was stated they they were breeding.
I really like how you wrote the sort of initiation ceremony because it read really nicely and it wasn't hard to feel for the poor dementor that had to suck the sanity from who I assume to be Sirius.
I'm not normally a fan of short chapters but I think it works quite well for this book, as it kind of portrays the dementor's sadness in a bittersweet way. It kind of leaves you wanting more in a really good way.

Overall I really loved this story, I loved the dementors Sass in particular and i doubt I'll be able to watch or read the dementor scene in OoTP the same way.

I really liked the way it was written, I think the way to improve it is just to lengthen some parts slightly, such as under the bridge and the initiation ceremony as I felt like they moved a little too fast. Loved the story and the concept and for a quick read it told so much.