STARS @JustADreamAway

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REVIEW FOR "STARS" BY @JustADreamAway_

MACY'S REVIEW
The prologue was really well written, Antares seems to be curious and might I add, very adorable.
I do like how you are keeping Sirius a secret from the child because it is uncommon in Sirius Black related fanfiction. I also love the relationship between the mother and her son, a lot of stories on wattpad keep forgetting that adults exist too.
There were a few grammatical errors but those would be easy to fix with a quick reread.
I like how you made Antares not like Sirius because a lot of 'Sirius Black is my father' fanfictions portray him as the good guy even though about 99% of the Wizarding population thought he was the one to kill Peter and the 12 muggles.
The emotion you put into each chapter is amazing, it makes me grow to love your book.
Ron's character portrayal is pretty good in the third chapter but I think he would just be a little less awkward.
I like how you also put character development in the mother, Sarina. She seems like such a nice person and I can't wait to continue reading and learn more about her.