Miku Tails

Chapter five

hi my readers ( if I have any) after you read this story I want you to tell me how I can improve or what I need to change. you can be as harsh as you want. I need to know what it is that will help me improve as a writer please and thank you!

As Miku and Sora approached the temple, something flew by them at a high speed rate. Miku looked back to see nothing behind her. as she pondered Sora had landed on the ground perching for her to get off. " is this the place? if so what do i learn here? " Sora said nothing but arch up and flew off. " well thanks for tricking me you stupid dragon.." she mumbled. she noticed how the temple was. there was deep blue water, the breeze around the temple was soft and cold. the temple was a aqua blue. the temple had some type of writing on it, ones that you see in video games. this looked like a video game, something no one would ever think would be here. as she walked down the golden path to the temple, she heard faint whispering. some sort of magical chant. Miku stood at the huge blue double doors. " should i really go in? i mean i don't know what to do or what to say.... what happens if theres some weird monsters in there waiting for me? what do i do" she had to decide

she pushed open the huge double doors and walked in.

the inside of the temple was perfect. just too perfect. the inside of the temple was covered with dark green vines and strange flowers that reacted every-time you walked passed them. the floor was glassy looking. it was a light blue lined with gold on the sides. on the sides on the long blue path was clear aqua water. as she walked down the path there were little balls of green, blue, yellow, pink, orange lights that seemed to follow her. were they fairies? was they here to help guid her? as she walked through there was another huge door. as she pushed open the door. she never though this was going to be real

a long golden staff hung on the wall. the head of the staff had seven slots that were an oddly gray color. there was a sort of aura in the room. Miku slowly took step by step to the long staff perched on the wall. as she did, she heard an eerie voice come from all over the room. the voice kept saying " you aren't worthy of the queens power." and breathed a heavy breath and repeated itself over again. " its just in my head its nothing snap out of it this staff is most likely here for me" she recalled the dragons words ( only you have to power to wield what is great ) after he had flown off. she shook of the though and reached out to grab the staff. suddenly there was a huge crash behind her, rocks and pillars falling. as miku regained her balance and looked back with widen eyes as she saw what was behind her. a lizard type demon was behind her weilding a huge ax blade. she froze with fear of what was about to happen to her. " you shall not get your hands on that staff! it belongs to me!". he swung his blade at a high speed rate. miku screamed and ducked down as the ax slammed into the wall behind her, flinging the sacred staff into the air. ( oh no! i was suppost to get the staff not give it to the enemy!) she got up and made a run to the staff. the staff had skidded on the floor inches away from her. as mIku ran, she had tripped over her own shaking feet and fell with a thud. she heard huge foot steeps behind her. they were closing in on her! Miku hurried and grabbed the staff and made a run for it out the huge opened double doors. " i- i'm going to die all for this stupid good for nothing staff! that damned dragon left me here to die! someon- ah! '. the ax swinging lizard had thrown his ax at her but had missed and it had landed only 6 inches away. miku flew into the air, out the temple and into the water. she opened her eyes only to see a blurry figure looking for her. she felt the waves in the water thrash around vilontly as her body was lifted high in the air. Miku coughed up water as the lizard held her in his huge hands. " your not going to get away with taking the staff, you must die no matter the cost!" at that moment the lizard had started squeezing her small form in his hands. she vilonety gasped for air as he kept chocking her. why? why out of all the people in the world, why did she have to be the one who fell down in a unknown hole attacked by demons only to end up almost getting killed. now she was really going to lose her life to this lizard. miku closed her eyes tight " if im going to die i want to die trying! if i really have a chance at saving this world. i want to try... i want to give it my all! " as miku said this, the staff in her left hand lit up in a light blue aura. a small tiny voice came to her from inside her head. " you are the one. you are the one that will close the portal to both our world and in doing so will purifiy the damaged souls." as this happened, miku transformed.

to be continued