Can you be my date?

NO!!!!!!

Val's Pov: I walked in the door and I found Laurie all dressed up laying on the floor in a small pool of blood around her.

I ran outside to Mak's and Peta who were waiting in his car.

" Mak's, Call 911 Now!!! It's Laurie!!!" I tell him and run back inside with Mak's and Peta right behind me

We made it back to Laurie and When Peta saw Laurie she started to cry into Mak's chest and I held Laurie's hand as tears streamed down my face fear raced through my body, As I held Laurie's hand I talked to her. I told her:

" Laurie, I don't know if you can hear me or not but I am saying this to you now and I will say it again and again hell I'll shout it from the rooftops. I love you, Laurie." I tell her

" I love you to, Val. I always have. I always will." She tells me before she loses consciousness

" LAURE!!! PLEASE WAKE UP!!! I CAN'T LOSE YOU!!!" I tell her starting to freak out

A few seconds later the paramedics showed up and put her on a spinal board and transported her to the ambulance and took off to the hospital. I raced outside to my car with Mak's and Peta right behind me.

We hopped in my car and I sped off before they could buckle up. We made it to the hospital just as Laurie was being rushed into the hospital I parked my car and rushed to the stretcher Laurie is laying on and ran with the doctors through the hospital corridors with Mak's and Peta behind me.

" Sir, You can't come back with us now. We have to take her to surgery." A nurse tells me

" Can I kiss her one more time. Please?" I ask the nurse

" Yes " She tells me

I rushed to the stretcher and kissed her lips.

" You do everything you can to keep her alive " I tell the doctor who nods at me as I watch them wheel her away from me

Mak's came and stood in front of me with his hands on my chest pushing me backwards to the waiting room.

When we got to the waiting room I called my parents who are here in L.A. To visit Mak's and I for 2 weeks and I called Laurie's family in New York.

My parents showed up and gave me hugs and words of encouragement.

{ 9 hours later }

I have been here for hours and no one has told me anything.

I am sitting in the waiting room next to my parents when I see a doctor walking in the waiting room. I shot up out of my seat and stood in front of the doctor with my family behind me

" Family and friends of Ms. Hernandez?" The doctor asks

" Her family is in New York. Is Laurie okay? Did she make it?" I ask the doctor bracing myself for the worst

" She is Alive and stable. Who are you, Sir?" The doctor asks me

" I was going to ask her to be girlfriend tonight. So, I don't really know what category I fit into" I tell him

" Ms. Hernandez , Is in stable condition but we are monitoring her closely." The doctor tells me

" Can I see her?" I ask the doctor

" Yes. You may see her." The doctor tells me

" When can I see her?" I ask the doctor

" What is your name, Sir?" The doctor asks me

" Val Chmerkovskiy" I tell him

" Mr. Chmerkovskiy, Ms. Hernandez is in coma." The doctor tells me

" Can I see her. Please?" I ask the doctor

" Follow me" The doctor tells me and Mak's and I follow him

We make it to the critical care unit.

" Do you want me to wait out here for you?" Mak's asks me

" I don't think I can do this by myself" I tell Mak's as tears flood my eyes

Mak's nods his head and I open the sliding door to reveal Laurie laying motionless in a hospital bed.

" Hey, Babe. I'm here. Everyone is here all you have to do is wake up." I say looking at the love of my life still motionless

" I know you probably can't hear me but I have to say this. Just so you know this is not how I wanted to say this. I love you Laurie. I love you so much more than in a brother/sister way." I tell her holding her hand

Mak's Pov: Val told me that he wanted to ask Laurie to be his girlfriend and he came up with a plan of how he wanted to do it.

Val had gotten all dressed up in suit and tie and had laid my clothes out for me.

We drove to Laurie's place and Val went to go knock on Laurie's door but she didn't answer so he unlocked her door and went in but came racing to my car telling us to call 911. Peta and I followed Val into Laurie's living room to find her in a small pool of her own blood.

A few minutes later an ambulance showed up and Val, Peta and I all got in Val's car and followed the ambulance to the hospital.

When we got to the hospital Val parked his car and started to run with the stretcher that Laurie was laying on until a nurse stopped him. Val asked the nurse if he could kiss Laurie and she said yes. I watched as my little brother kissed the love of his life probably for the last time if she didn't make it.

My parents, Peta , Val and I, All waited in the waiting room for news on Laurie.

Now I am in a hospital room watching my little brother profess his love for Laurie.

Despite the tube down Laurie's throat Val found a way to kiss her lips.

Val saw her eyelids start to move and called the doctor in the room.

" It looks like she is waking up" The doctor tells Val

Laurie woke up and the tube was taken out of her throat and she recognized us and she kissed Val in front of our parents and while Laurie slept soundly Val called her parents.

Laurie woke up again and Val decided that he was going to ask Laurie to be his girlfriend and asked If I could film it.

" Laurie, I love you, Also, this is not how I wanted to ask you but will you be my girlfriend?" Val asks her

" I thought you would never ask" She tells Val and kisses him while their small audience claps for the happy couple

The next morning Laurie was released from the hospital and since her place is currently a crime scene Laurie will be staying with Val.

When I found out that Laurie will be staying with Val at his place I sent him a text saying:

From Mak's ~ To Val

Remember to use a condom

And Val replied with this.

From Val ~ To Mak's

Mak's, We just became boyfriend and girlfriend and she just got out of the hospital. I don't think that we will be having sex.

I am very thankful that Laurie is okay and I am also glad that I will be seeing Laurie more often.