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|Title| For me the title is a bit vague because it doesn't really have anything to do with the story. But it is kinda cute!
|Cover| I like how most of the colours on the cover are similar, it gives it this nice warm feeling! Perhaps my least favourite thing about it is that the images are cut in a strange way 😊
|Synopsis| Short and straight to the point. It tells you all the necessary information without wasting any words!
|Plot| I like the plot quite a lot! It's interesting and quite sweet although quite a few things don't really work out (context). For example, what is Gilbert doing going to school at the age of 18?! And why is Prissy there when she was in her last year of school in the series?! And how did Gilbert's house get sold when it belongs to HIM?! There are more mistakes like this but despite all of them the plot IS entertaining.
|Characters| At the beginning of the story you give a cast for your characters, but despite this, you really should describe your characters. For example, when Gil sees Anne he just says that she's beautiful, but I want to know more: Is she tall? Short? Is her hair the same as always? Are her freckles still there? Is she pale or tanned? And the same for all the other characters in it (Including Gilbert!). Despite the cast readers need a description so they can imagine the characters however they want.
|Originality| I think this story is quite original, even though there are a lot of stories right now about Gilbert and Anne! I think that the addition of James is good although he hasn't been causing as much chaos as I expected! I would have liked it if you had avoided the cliché ball that everybody seems to be using recently (that to me doesn't really fit in the context anyway), but I do think the ball scene in this case is cute and a bit random!
|Writing Style| I did notice a few typos, but I'm glad to say your grammar is not at all bad! I think that maybe you could use a few more words to say something because your style is very direct (something I myself need to work on). Please describe people's body language instead of saying "Gilbert's face went red with anger" (or something like that), it looks so much better if you describe that anger "Gilbert's face went red and his body tensed" for example. You're not SAYING he is angry, you are SHOWING it 😊
|Overall| Overall I like it! It's cute and interesting and you ship Ruberry (a bonus point in my eyes)! I will definitely be following the progress of this book!
