|Title| To me the title doesn't tell you much about the story but it's kind of cute!
|Cover| The cover is cute but I don't think the colour of the font suits it? It's simple and not cluttered, something I like.
|Description| I like how you've added some of what I guess is a conversation Gilbert and Anne will have later on! The description doesn't give too much information but I think it gives enough to attract readers!
|Plot| I love that you are writing about Gilbert's return and I think it's going to be an interesting story. The one main problem I have is that it all happens a bit to fast, because although we all know Anne and Gilbert, we don't know YOUR Anne and Gilbert so I would have liked a bit more time to get to know Anne better before Gilbert returned. It's just a bit fast!!! Also it would be nice if you set the time a bit more, because I want to know how long it's been since he left and how old they all are!
|Characters| I think I already talked about them in the plot section (ups!). I obviously love all the characters (if not what am I doing in this community?), but I want to know more about your versions of them. It's a hard thing to do as a writer because you just want to get on with the amazing plot you have in mind but it really makes the story much more attractive if at least the main character's personality is well described... even if your readers already know who the character is!!
|Originality| I think it's pretty original so far and I can tell there's going to be a lot of trouble to come! Even though there are loads of fanfics about Gilbert Blythe, I think this one is going to be very different!
|Writing| Your writing is good, I like how you don't continuously say stuff like "Anne was excited" and "Ruby was jelous", instead you sometimes describe the body language which is very attractive for a reader. For example, instead of saying "Gilbert entered the room slowly, meeting Anne's eyes and feeling nervous" it sounds much better if you say "Gilbert slowly entered the crowded room, feeling his heart race as he met Anne's warm green eyes" (Not the best of examples but I think you get the point).
In conclusion, if you describe the body language more and you perhaps use a few more words to tell your reader something (you have the same problem I do, you're not one to waste words) then your writing will be very good!
|Questions| Does the story sound interesting enough to read? Yes, I'm intrigued and I really want to know what's going to happen! Especially between Ruby and Anne (I can sense trouble ahead!). Please please PLEASE don't delete the story!
|Overall| I think it has great potential and with a few changes it could be an amazing book!!!
The title isn't really eye catching and it doesn't say much like what unicorn said, but when I read the description it explained why.
|Cover|
The cover was creative, but not appealing to me. Also same thing the colors for the text doesn't fit the title very much.
Description|
I really like your description and how you layed it out and also it explains what's going to happen a little bit before the book even starts.
|Plot|
I think you should make the plot descriptive like explaining their appearance more after not seeing eachother for awhile and more your Anne's thinking/feelings.
Characters|
I want to know your own version of Anne with an e characters personalities more and how they feel about things.
|Originality|
I guess it's pretty original like Gilbert still makes mistakes calling Anne, carrots. Never thought of that before.
|Writing|
Your writing is okay, but maybe if you can describe more of your surroundings and everything else, also your grammar was good, no mistakes.
|Overall|
The book is intriguing and I can't wait for more chapters to come up! By the way, this is my first time reviewing someone's book so it isn't good, sorry.
