This is the review for NamingSystemIsStupid 's book Autumn Evening. Let's dive right in, yeah?
The description is short and sweet, which is my favorite kind.
The plot is unique and sounds intriguing. So far the plot seems very evident and the story seems to stay on topic without adding a bunch of random ideas into it. The writing style does seem a bit choppy, though. To avoid this, try adding various sentence lengths and styles; this way, the words flow better and make the reader want to read more. Even simple sentences are okay. As long as there aren't a bunch of simple sentences in a row, you should be good.
Also, I think adding a little more subtle details would make a world of difference.
And now to the characters. I think my favorite character is Amery; I really like the name and the character is very distinct. I have a feeling Mrs. Lena is going to be the antagonist of the story. She's very suspicious and seems to know more about Will's wife than him.
Overall, this book is off to a great start.
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Random"You were born an original. Don't die a copy" My artwork improves by the chapter, so the beginning is kind of sketchy. Hard work doesn't work unless you work hard :) Cover painted by: hope_sees_the_stars (me) Cover title done by: KateAnn21
