Alternate Ending!!

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-------I was on a walk and I thought what if I wrote an alternate ending to this story? Would Kiley live or would she still die? what would happen? This starts in Ch. 26 right before Kiley leaves to find Michael. Enjoy----------

As I pulled on my shirt, making a mental plan of what I was going to do to Michael Brooks, the man responsible for Angela's death my phone rang. The caller ID said it was an unknown number. I picked it up anyways.

"Hello?" I said lightly.

A female voice responded. "Do not go. Stay." The other end hung up. My phone buzzed. It was a text message, saying the same thing.

I was confused on who it was. The voice belonged to neither Root or Shaw, or anyone I knew. It sounded like a recording. Was Finch making recordings and sending them to my phone? Did he know what I was going to do?

I hesitated, sitting on my bed, letting the message play over and over in my mind. I heard Finch grunt and say "Did you do it?"

"Yes, Michael's dead. Carter's on her way to the scene as we speak." It was Reese. Did he send that message?

"Where's Kiley?" Root's voice echoed.

"In her room, why? Is something wrong?"

"Nothing's wrong Harry, I just want to talk to her."

"Well you know where her room is." I heard footsteps coming down to my room. The door opened.

Root stepped in, she looked worried.

"Something wrong Root?"

"Did you recieve a phone call" she squeaked out.

"Yes, from an unknown number. All the other end said was 'Do not go. Stay.' Was it a recording that uncle Finch made?"

"No, it was Her warning you beforehand." Root's voice was back to normal. "Like she always does. She asked me to check on you and make sure you listened." Root closed my door and left.

Was Root saying that the machine just saved my life by telling me to stay? Did the machine jsut save my life?

After a few minutes I switched back into the shorts and tank top I had been wearing before and headed out to the living room ,where team machine was. i poured myself a glass of water and headed to a couch.

"Hey uncle Finch. Dows you machine intervene in crimes before they happen or does it just throw people off track?"

Uncle Finch looked up from his computer, his eyes big.

"What?"

"Does your machine try to throw the crimes it stops off or just people involved in those crimes?"

"The machine just warns me about the people involved in the crime. I know nothing of the crime until I figure it out with the help of Mr. Reese and Ms. Shaw and Ms. Groves. Why do you ask darling?"

"Because earlier tonight when I overheard that Michael was the number I was going to stop him. And by stop him I mean kill him. But I got a call before telling me to stay. So I did and now i know Michael is dead." I took a deep breath.

 "Was it your machine that called me?"

Uncle Finch brushed my hair away from my eyes. "Yes, Kiley. It was."

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