Mental health poetry

Depression

I'm drowning,
I am constantly drowning,
Forever,
The only thing I can rely on.

I'm drowning,
You're all completely oblivious
To my pain.
No one understands my torment.

I'm drowning
In a sea of eternal suffering.
One last breath
Before I go under forever.

I'm dying.
It has consumed me entirely.
I only hope,
That you can forgive me...

Please tell me what you think - I welcome any feedback/advice. Thank you 😁