Chapter 70 the proposal

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Soarin POV

the next day....

I'm... Scared.. As.... Hell..

I asked the bolts to do a performance for dashie and they accepted.. We practiced for about a week and when it was time... This is gonna be my cue..

Me and dashie were sitting on the grass.  Just under her cloud house..

Time check: 7:00 pm...

We were starring at the stars and then...

"so hey dash...have you ever heard of a meteor shower?" I asked

"yes... They said that it only comes one's in someone's life... Some are lucky to see it and the others.... Bad luck... Why?" she said

"well... " I said and moved her chin up the sky and I gave the bolts a cue..

By the way I asked rarity to make a silver shining outfit and it glows with the help of Twilight's magic

They flew from up towards the ground and some went vertically and slanting.... And more! This is like a new stunt made by me 😂

With the outfits it looks Like a real meteor shower....

When they were done they dashed down in a slanting way and flew away so me and her could have a moment alone..

"Wow.. That was... Amazing" she gasped

"I know your welcome" I said and she hugged me tightly

"I really really love you" she said and started to cry.

"Awe dashie I love you too with all my heart" I said and kissed her.

"What did I do to deserve you?" she whispered and hugged me tightly

"but rainbow There's been something I've been meaning to ask... " I said...

"Really?" she asked

"Y-yea" I started to sweat...

"Tell me" she said and I....






























I looked down

"What's wrong?" she asked and lifted my chin up

"s-sorry just nervous" I chuckled nervously

She giggled and said

"Take your time" she said

I inhaled and took out a guitar I bought with me earlier

I started a few cords and looked at her..

She was getting more and more interested...



Her bangs was covering her face and I can tell she was crying

I moved it and saw her with tears of joy

"Great! Now you got me acting all sappy!" she said and we both laughed

"I'm so inlove with you fight now I could just do "it" right here right now"  she said and we laughed again

"Rainbow your the most beautiful amazing,  awesome,  and did I mention beautiful? I just love you with all my heart. I could not live without you. You made me happy from that moment we both met when we were kids... And..until now... " I started

"this date is probably the best one yet" she chuckles

"I hope so" I said and stood up

"I have one last activity" I winked.

She looked at me and smirked

"do tell" she said and I pounced on her

She giggles and I said

"But first you have to..." Catch" me" I said and ran around the grass and she cheers and chases after me.

"wooohooo!!! Yeah!" she said and continues to catch me

When I got tired she suddenly pounced on me and I kissed her

"where is that activity you speak off?" she grinned

"let's sit on the cloud" I said and she followed.

"and now?" she asked

"since you heard if the meteor shower have you ever heard if a shooting star?" I said and she nodded

"Well this shooting star is many!" I cheered

"You literally just described the exact same thing" she said and I laughed

I signaled wave chill the cue and tadaa! Fire works display

At the end there was a message saying



"Will you marry me?"





She gasped and her hooves covered her mouth.... She looked at me and I kneeled down and opened the box for her to reveal a ring...

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(Hola Amigos! Sus Le author!
(hello  friends!!! its The Author)
So uhh yea a lot of things might happen and...I know you are all excited right!? WHO'S EXITED!?!?
now... Don't say anything like "why aren't I here yet!?" "Where is me!?😢😢" and something like that.  Ok!? Some might show at the celebration and some might show at the reception! So Be patient... It just hurts my brain if your being impatient OK!? Ok...so yea I'll see y'all next chapter byeee!!!)

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