The Road So Far (Being Rewritten)

Chapter 31: Take It Away Dad.

                           Xavier

I sat in front of the abanded warehouse. The boy had one hell of a scent. Of course all Wolves usually did. "Are we the wheelman... Do we just sit here until unicorns start fly out of the building" Stephen asked.  "Do all of you're jokes have to do with fictional character" I asked. Stephen bit down on his nails, "No, just the fact that you ruined my childhood, and not to mention Zander" Step said in his smart ass/ dumb ass tone.

   I watched the outside, knowing Zander was dragging Remiel ass around like the piece of trash he was. "Get the Holy Oil and Coal... We have to burn the building from the outside for Heaven to open up to a Werewolf" I ordered as I got out of the SS. Stephen look up the tall building. "How far will he make it". I knew what my boy was made of. He was a Warrior, born and raised in a rought life. I knew he was the chosen one. "He'll make it... His is my son, and so are you".

      I walked around the building, dropping coal down and pouring Holy Oil over the pavement and bottom of the building, splashing it were ever. "Grab the lighter, he's almost there" I commanded. Stephen came running with the flip hold lighter Zander gave Spencer for fathers day.

      Spencer never treated Zander like a kid, of course he knew Zander wasn't his. But he never judged Stephen. Zander always tried, but he always got shut out. Stephen dropped the lighter, making the flames burn even brighter. "Come on Zander... You can do it".

Questions

1. How's the book so far.

2. What do you see happening.

3. Should I make a saga.

4. Are Zander and Genevieve a good pair.

5. If someone had to die, who and why.

6. Is Zander a good character. Does he fit the Warrior profile.

         *Also, I'm going back in the story and fixing the small mistakes I made. Keep up the support please and thank you.
                      -AubreyBreanneHayes