Wattpad Story Awards 2018 [SEASON 3-CLOSED]

Teen Fiction Genre Scores and Feedback

"Failure is the key to success; each mistake teaches us something."

📚Teen Fiction
📕Judge's: BlankTaaee, Regine_DS, TheLadder89

1 nenjiexx -Chasing in Darkness👑
2 babyghelo -Tomboy's in Love
3 HopelessWings- The Third Party🎖
4 joaneverth-Psyche with Three Cupids
5 glamorousxpixie-Sing For You🏅
6 ItsRaiiinnn- Waiting For You
7 enirose19- Band Aid

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👑CHAMPION

I. Title: Chasing in Darkness by nenjiexx
Judge: TheLadder89
Book Cover (10): 9
Kahit na parang picture lang ito ng kung sino, nilagyan nf filter at title, it still capture the sense of the story, kung saan sila nag-umpisang magkakilala.
Title (10): 10
Unique ang title mo. I searched and it came up on top. Good job. Hindi ko babaguhin ang title, nakaka-curious siya. The font for me is fine, solid white on the a dark background.
Blurb (15): 14
Maganda ang pakakahamig mo ng mga salita, angkop na angkop sa title mo. I was pulled to read the whole thing ng dahil sa description mo. Almost perfect na, except for one. Go back ang fix the word “hesitations”, yun lang.
Technicalities (20): 19
Kung ilalagay ko lahat dito ng mga nakita kong dapat mong baguhin masyadong mahaba. I highlighted few of them on an inline comment. Makikita mo naman siguro doon, just fix it and please learn the basic grammar. Using “did” as the past tense for “do”, need to use an action word in a present tense. It goes like this; did + present tense is the same as past tense of the verb. The same as using the negative form “didn’t”. Example: Statement form. “You broke my heart.” You can say or write, “You did break my heart.” For a negative form: “You did not break my heart.” You may say or write, “You didn’t break my heart.” Question form. “You ate?” You may say or write, “Did you eat?” Negative form: “You did not eat.” “Didn’t you eat?” Trust me when I say, I too have the same problem sometimes. I have to close my eyes and say it out loud. Mga simpleng bagay na kung hindi natin pagtutuunan ng pansin ay maaaring makasira sa kalidad ng kwento natin. Basahin mo lang uli ang gawa mo at makikita mo ang mga sinasabi ko.
Plot (15): 15
Dito ako nahirapan. Hindi pwedeng laktawan ang bawat bahagi ng kabanata dahil hindi. Maiintindihan ang kasunod na sinasabi. Ang ganda, concentrate lang talaga sa kanilang dalawa at sa kung ano ang nangyayari at mangyayari. Sabi mo nga doon author’s note me, “hindi ko alam kung bakit ako nagsulat ng weird na story.” Well, weird nga siya but it is a good kind of weird. You made us more aware of how powerful our mind could be. Thank you.
Uniqueness (20): 20
It is not as unique as I think it would be but the way you break you chapter down and describe how each of characters felt made your readers feel it, too, that made your story unique. We see what they see. Kung paanong naging kakaiba pa rin siya sa ibang kwento. You painted vivid colored scenario in each word. I won’t change it one bit. Kung nagbabasa ka ng ibang mga stories, continue doing so, it’ll give you more ideas. Good job!
Cleanliness (10): 9
Malinis naman siya to begin with, ayusin mo na lang yung konting technicalities. Salamat.
Judges Incentive: (I really want to give the writer +5 but it will take her to 101, please help.)

Total: 96    (101%)

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II. Title: Chasing in Darkness by nenjiexx
a. Book Cover - 10
   All I can say is pang Novel ang Book Cover mo. Cute pang pro na tunay.
b. Title - 10
   I hits the bullseye kung bakit ganun ang title mo ^^ And I could say that you had a great time thinking for a good and excellent title.
c. Blurb - 15
   The kind of blurb you had is yung mauuwi ka nalang sa pag-aadd nito sa library mo to read it. Yung blurb na macucurious at mapapatanong ka why is that?
d. Technicalities - 19
   In terms of grammars, spellings and etc. wala tayong problema dun, I find your creation great.
e. Plot - 9
   Usapang plot naman, gaya nga ng sabi mo ang story ay inspired sa kita-kita I don't know kung ako lang ba o yung iba rin na mas nakikita ang plot ng kita-kita sa story mo kaysa sa plot na nabuo mo.
f. Uniqueness - 15
   Gaya nga ng sabi ko nakikita ko ang plot ng kita-kita sa story, although hindi direct na parehas na scenarios pero may something ba parehas talaga.
g. Cleanliness - 10
   Malinis pa sa malinis, pang novel na nga ang ayos. Good job good luck and God Bless.