I'm Dead Inside

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Was this worth the read? I'm looking back at this story, and I think I went overboard on a few things,  and didn't have the best grasp on others.

Should this be deleted? 

The real question is, Should I stop cringing at the overuse of the bad lango. I mean, JEESUS CHRIST. Even one bad word is to much for me in talking, so why did I do this? 

Inner morals, where did you go?

Common sense? Are you even still there?

Younger me, WHYYYYYYYY!?


I have seen people voting on this, and commenting, though....

QUICK, GRAB THE STRAY DOG AND THROW IT AT THE SCREEN TO MAKE THIS BOOK EVEN BETTER

I may just try and add, rewrite, and cut out some of the cussing if y'all want me to. :D 

One dog thrown at the screen = one chapter revised 



(Please don't hurt your pets......)

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