Hello guys/gals. I would like to thank you guys for the feedback. I would like to say I love negative feedback. No, I am not being sarcastic. As an author, letting me know what you do or don't like tells me I need to do for that story or for those to come.
Today, I received my first constructive criticism and at first, my heart sank. (Literally my chest started to hurt.) But then, it made me really happy and realize that there is something I could probably change.
My biggest problem: no details and the way I write.
Now, I write on my ipod and phone. I have tried my laptop, but the files would erase on me.
Anyways, please don't hesitate to tell me if there are areas I need to improve. However, there is a kind way to say it. If you do get rude and uncouth about it, then it will be dealt with in the same fashion.
Anyways, thanks for the feedback and I will try to be more vivid.
-2braidz
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Romance(BWWM) Shana is normal college student. That is until she meets Luke Agrippa. After the hell of a lifetime, with love and misfortune, can these two young adults ride the love train? Or will it end in one big train wreck?
