hello friends! I have some good news, I've reopened the book and rewriting some of the chapters in it, only the first chapter so far. (After I finish rewriting I will post a new part!!)
Well, I honestly didn't even think that anyone would still be waiting on this, but I got spammed with votes yesterday (even a death threat lol) and decided to have a crack at writing another chapter. But when I went back and re-read some previous chapters I realized how terrible they were, so I'm redoing it, and by it, I mean almost everything. (The information chapter will have a list of all the chapters and whether I rewrote, edited, or left them as they were, so check that out)
So with me doing this, I want you all to comment and tell me what you would like to see remain in the book (favourite scenes, etc) and what you think I could do better, I am looking for criticism, your not gonna hurt my feelings or anything, so do your worst. oh! all the redone chapters will be marked with *DONE* at the bottom or top (most likely bottom) and if you find that a chapter is missing I've probably unpublished it to rewrite it.
Thanks for sticking with me for so long! I hope you enjoy the new chapters.
-Whitedress24
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||Walk me home||
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