Borderline Perfection Borderline Rejection (Editing)

Sonnet

Your eyes glistened with a soft strange beauty.
I didn't have a clue how much you cared,
which is why I fell for your extacy.
When you left I felt alone and so scared.

You had all the power to take over.
To leave and be just fine that you left me.
Never knowing you had so much power
over my mind and personality.

My favorite scene was found in your skies,
with the reflections in your blue-gray pools.
The little ocean that accents your eyes.
Thinking we could last made me a dumb fool.

Taking in the view of the lifeless dawn
I can't see a meaning now that your gone.