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A sort of disclaimer for intolerant and butthurt lads.
I recognize the time and effort of the writer and their dedication towards their work.I don't intend to insult or mock their work in anyway.I just intend to give an honest review of how I feel and see the book.My review wouldn't be applicable after they've edited their book, so don't be the dumbass who wages a war about my review being stupid. Definitely contains spoilers.
As a reader, the first thing that actually interests you is the name of the book and then, second thing you see is the cover. Whatever we might say, we do judge a book by its cover and more so, by its title. Honestly, the cover didn't excite me at all; neither did it draw me towards the book. It was rather cringe worthy, just like the title. Both combined spelled cliché. It just plainly was bad. The writer might have put their soul in making this cover, but I can't imagine any of it, when I see this cover or title. It is not aesthetic or funny. This cover would work if this book was parody. Changes need to be done in this department.
Blurb/Summary – {3/10}
The first line of the blurb has grammatical errors, just like the rest of the blurb. Almost every reader reads the blurb to see what the book is about or what's coming , and all I see is, a book filled with grammatical errors and misery for grammar Nazis coming. See, I don't want to be harsh or say rubbish about anyone's work but the problem is so clear. The book is a cliché written in distorted English. From what I have read in the blurb all I gathered is that this heartbroken woman met a heartbroken man, they kiss and everyone falls in love, but obviously secretly.
If this isn't pathetic enough that two heartbroken people get together, there is jealousy, a love triangle and tragic, the past (that is how you wrote it) sprinkled over it to make it worse. You end it with a 'read to find out' but I say what, all I could ever get from this story, I have already read it in the description. This blurb is simply not up to any mark, grammatically, creatively or in any way. It lacks any substance to it. It makes your story seem very loosely based and not all like something that could have a good plot. Your story seems to lack originality and I know many cliché stories which lack originality, but still have an enticing blurb. I would suggest doing serious changes and editing in the blurb section.
Grammar and Vocabulary – {1.5/10}
Excuse my nagging, but the amount of grammatical errors in the even the first paragraph of prologue really distract you from continuing the book. They work like an absolute nightmare and make it difficult to make sense of the book. The tenses are haywire, articles are misused, wrong verb have been used and adjectives have not been used properly. For instance:
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