If you want your story to get noticed, do not post it on other books in the comments. People who have written the book will get offended, and it takes away from the story they worked hard on.
If you want to get your story noticed then write it in an author's note on your other stories if you have some, or check your followers and see if anyone is interested in that type of genre and message them.
Or just ask me to read it, I read almost everything. Even if I do not like the genre it is.
There are also people who will advertise your books, just ask them.
