"THE DEFENCE AGAINST THE DARK ARTS HAD AN IRON CHANDELIER HUNG FROM THE CEILING, AS WELL AS A DRAGON'S SKELETON. "
in which the admins review your stories.
note: this book is meant for us to give you our opinions of how you can improve your writing...
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TITLE 10/10: it's unique and interesting!
COVER 10/10: the cover is so cool!
DESCRIPTION 7/10: it's really short, so you might want to add a little bit more
FACE CLAIMS 10/10: they're perfect!
STORYLINE 10/10: woah. the plot is very strong. it's clearly planned out, and it's executed well
BONUS 4.5/5, grammar: it's nearly perfect!
NOTES/ REVIEW: i haven't read much of your book yet, because i've been behind on time, but it is clear to me that you are very dedicated to it and have put a lot of work into it. there's not too much i would say to improve on. good job!
