"THE DEFENCE AGAINST THE DARK ARTS HAD AN IRON CHANDELIER HUNG FROM THE CEILING, AS WELL AS A DRAGON'S SKELETON. "
in which the admins review your stories.
note: this book is meant for us to give you our opinions of how you can improve your writing...
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TITLE 10/10: it's definitely unique; I like it
COVER 10/10: wow, it's beautiful!
DESCRIPTION 10/10: well done, it builds suspense and explains the story well
FACE CLAIMS 10/10: they fit well, and I've hardly seen any of them before (which is a good thing)
STORYLINE 5/10: it's clear and planned out well. however, even though there were a few interesting parts, I just couldn't get myself invested in the plot or the characters. although this might just be my personal problem, it would probably be a good idea to keep adding elements to make it more of a rich plot and keep readers hooked
BONUS 5/5, grammar: practically perfect!
NOTES/ REVIEW: overall, a very well-written story, but for me, the fascination just wasn't there. well done with everything else though
