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Judge: everybloodyusername 

1. My hope by AgustDbae_Suga

Title: too overused although it suits the story. But yes, associating Hoseok with hope all the type is too mainstream 7/10

Cover: the cover gives you good vibes about the story 8/10

Description: the description is too short but gives out everything in the story the reader needs to know 8/10

Writing: the author has poor English and it shows. Grammatical mistakes in every 10th line is not something I'd read personally. Use of tenses is not taken care of and wrong tenses are used from time to time. 19/25

Prologue/first chapter: I'm not saying anything about the chapter titles and it does seem aesthetic because it's something in Korean I suppose. Overuse of words and phrases. Reciting the same things again and again. Sorry but nah 21/25

Plot: the initial plot is good but it can be better. Just as I said before, the author keeps repeating the same things and the sudden change of pov is not a good factor. One second I'm reading it from the girl's pov and the next line starts from third person. Why?Things haven't been made clear throughout. Overuse of everything. 39/45

Ending: too abrupt. 18/25

Total score: 120/150

2. Butterfly by mctaetea 

Title: though the title is over used, it kind of fits this particular story 8/10

Cover: plain.simple.appealing.just right for the story 9/10

Description: the description is reassuring and cute. Gives away the theme of the story in a good way. Though it's short 9/10

Writing: I like the writing style if the author. The chapters are VERY short and have large spaces between each line. It may seem weird to many people. The author knows what the reader wants to read. 22/25

Prologue/chapter 1: convincing and to the point. 23/25

Plot: the plot is amazing. Just neutral. You're very hooked till the ending.42/45

Ending: the ending makes you feel good (?) Though I am not a fan of happy endings, this one got me :) 22/25

Total score: 135/150


3. Homeless by taehphoria

Title- suits the story well. 10/10

Cover: the cover is just aesthetic. It's just a picture, not a cover 4/10

Description: short but perfect. Gives away everything necessary 9/10

Writing: I'm in love with the author. What else? 25/25

Prologue/chap 1 - as the story starts with texts, it's appealing 24/25

Plot: the plot is well thought of and constantly running 43/45

Ending: sweet, simple but predictable 24/25

Total score- 139/150


Judge: HopeWorlTrash_BTS - has 1 more book to send in, One of their books 'Flower' by angstify was not found since author has no works on profile.

1. Her Highness by MicDrop_Cooky

Title: 9/10

Cover: 10/10

Description: 9/10

Writing: 23/25

Prologue/first chapter: 24/25

Plot: 43/45

Last chapter: 25/25

Final marks: 143/150


2. Ideal type by taehyunguyen

Title: 10/10

Cover: 10/10

Description: 9/10

Writing: 20/25

Prologue/first chapter: 20/25

Plot: 40/45

Last chapter: 21/25

Final marks: 130/150

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