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Judge: SunbaeScout
1. Heartbeat by imshyara
Title: The title is a bit generic, and could be better fitted to the story 7/10
Cover: Relevant picture. - The picture is somewhat relevant as the main character's big brother, but it could have been Jungkook since that's who she falls in love with.7/10
Description: The description is short and to the point. It tells you exactly what you need to know.10/10
Writing: The writing flowed well. The grammar didn't have any issues. There were only minor mistakes in translation to English.20/25
Prologue and or first chapter: The introduction of characters is done well. It didn't really grab me to pull me in.17/25
Plot: The plot is watered down. With a slow burn of 30 chapters length there needs to be more intensity in the drama, more push and pull.20/45
Last chapter or epilogue: I was hoping to feel heart ache in their parting. With the author's writing style exploring emotional depth would really bring their work to a new height.17/25
Total: 118/150
Judge: KookiesandTae2141
1.Reach by nira014
The cover is GREAT and it seems to pull the reader to read it. The description is okay, but I wouldn't say it was the best. It could use some more feeling and maybe not use text language like "plz", and fix the grammar. The writing was pretty bad, mainly because of the grammar and incorrect spelling. I advise not using so much text language, and I get that the author is from another country, but you could use apps to help you as well. Also the punctuation was pretty bad as well. There were barley any quotation marks, and half the time I was confused on who was talking. Along with all the commas and periods. The first chapter was okay, but it did seem a bit rushed. It explained a bit about the character, but the desires of the character seemed hugely unrealistic. It also seems pretty boring, and I dont feel like the reader would really continue that much. The plot seemed very rushed. It was really confusing, and I didn't even know what was going on half the time. The characters were really blurry and I felt like everything was going way too fast. There wasn't much info about the characters which made it very hard to understand the story. The story is on hold at the moment, but the latest chapter wasn't that great either. It wasn't really that interesting and it ended in an okay point. I high advise this author to get a writing app, because there are a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes. I also advise them to think out the story before publishing it
Score: 87/150
2. Be My Enemy by jamless_chimmy14
The cover is really nice and amazing, and it explains what the story is about in some sort of way. The description is really good, but I would advise capitalizing your words instead of doing the whole thing being lowercase. The writing was really great, but I still think it would've been better if the words were capitalized. The intro was also pretty nice and I don't have anything to advise about that. The plot is great, but some parts of the story seemed a bit rushed. The ending was really nice and it seemed to sum up the story.
