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Judge: Yoonique3
1. Dare by imshyara
Title:The title of the book(Dare) really. Not very original 7/10
Cover:I think the cover is very stunning and eye-catching. Just judging by the cover it looks like it's gonna be a very good book.(10/10)
Description:The description was really good. It didn't give out too much information and it was very descriptive. Sometimes I find that when I read the descriptions of stories, it would sometimes throw me off and make me not want to read the book but your description was nicely organized.(10/10
Writing:Your writing was very impressive, there wasn't any mis-spellings which is very good and your grammar was okay as well but however there was one part of the story that I didn't think really made any sense, it was something like "you Taehyung noticed that" and for that little part I just didn't really understand but it's only something very small but you your vocabulary and grammar is general was very, very impressive.(23/25)
First Chapter/Opening:The opening was a very good way of starting your story. It was definetley creative and was also still very interesting. You weren't lazy on it which was good and it was descriptive and made sense. It was the type of chapter that would make you want to continue reading the book which can be hard.(24/25)
Plot:The plot was very creative. It was kind of sudden when Taehyung confessed to y/n during prom. It was very sweet though and was very interesting. I would definetley recommend this book to other readers who are looking for books!(44/45)
Last Chapter:So it was kinda like what I said for the plot and it was when Taehyung confessed to y/n which was definately heart-warming and sweet. (23/25)
Total: (141/150)Tips: For tips, sometimes it is good to read over your stories before you publish them to make sure everything's okay. If you do, then that's great! Sometimes you can maybe tell someone to read over it like a friend or sibling maybe. Your story is very good and is a work of art, keep up the good work!
Judge: Arilezx
1.Fragments by anicecupofspilledink
title: 9/10 kinda generic but not bad
cover: 10/10 one word. beautiful (af)
description: 10/10 art. simply art.
writing style: 24/25 yeng, you are so talented. your writing is nothing but beautiful. but, really yeng, keep it simple.as much as i adore your writing, being overly descriptive is not gonna help you at all. i simply found myself skipping some lines because they were too much.
prologue: 24/25
plot: 42/45 basic plot but very well written.
epilogue: 25/25
total: 144/150
2.One Mistake, Ten Lies Prntai
title: 8/10 kinda cliché
cover: 5/10 not appealing at all. it was all wrong
description: 7/10 way too long and revealing. wasn't interesting enough
