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Judge: trishajain365
1. Wolf Allergic by mociminji
Title: the title is totally fitting and perfect. It clearly explained S the story and no changes needed.
Marks: 10/10
Cover: The cover has a picture of Bamboo holding a bottle and he is the main character. The picture and words are clear. Does not express the story well and is not quite related to the plot. The cover could have a werewolf
Marks:8.5/10
Description: there is a description and explains the plot quite well. It outlines the theme too. No improvement needed. But could be a bit more elaborate.
Marks: 8/10
Writing: writing style extremely good and witty. Describes things extremely well and helps reader visualise things. Very little grammatical errors. Makes reader excited. Narrative style. A little less flashbacks needed.
Marks: 23/25
First chapter: has a quite good opening. It engages the reader to read further. And is very well written. Marks: 24/25
Plot: The plot is original. Seems a little rushed to me personally in the start but maybe it is just me. The plot is exciting and the intro of each members is amazing.
Marks: 42/45
Last chapter: Quite good ending and has a very romantic one. No more words needed.Marks: 23/25
Total: 138.5/150
2. Ink by problematicbangtan
Title: The title guys the story well but seems a bit overused. No other title would fit this one though. Marks: 7/10
Cover: The cover is of Namjoon and it is a photo of him with his eyes closed. Cover seems appropriate but not too intriguing. Does not express the story well. Words are clear. Improvement needed.
Marks: 6/10
Description: description is there. It does not explain the plot to some extent. It does outline the theme though. Improvements in making it sound more exciting needed.
Marks: 7/10
Writing: the style is good but a bit short. Also a bit awkward. Things not described that well. A little depressing and short chapters with abrupt scenes. Needs a lot of improvements.
Marks: 17/25
First chapter: Sets a abrupt and straightforward opening. Not exceedingly good.
Marks: 15/25
Plot: the plot seems original. It is quite rushed. A little overused too. No plot twist so far. Also a bit confusing.
Marks: 33/45
Last chapter: not completed.
Marks: 16/25
Total: 101/150
P.s: If she reads other books and gets more inspiration then she might improve herself a lot
3. The truth untold by BangtanNJ
Title: the title is very appropriate and fits the story well. It explains it too. Marks: 10/10
Cover: the cover is a picture of namjoon standing with the words 'mic drop' written behind. Could use more details. Marks: 7/10
Description: the description is very small but highlights the main item of the plot m needs to be more elaborate. Marks: 6/10
