Live while were young - Niall Horan - One direction Fanfiction

Live while were young - Chapter 5

I might stop making my story because no one comments...i dont know if people like it or not?! so yeah...comment what you think or Ill just stop making them...

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Liams P.O.V.

I knew just the girl to get Jaz off Louis mind. She was called Eleanor. I had met her at a signing once and ever since we'd been best friends, she'd always had a crush on Louis but she didnt want me to set them up...

I decided to call her, worth a try. The phone rang three times before a sweet "Hello?" Rang through into my ear. 

"Hey! Its Liam, I need to ask you a massive favour!" 

"Okay...go ahead!"

I explained the whole Jaz, Niall situation and how Lou felt about it. I planned a secret date for the two of them hoping it would go well and Louis would be over Jaz!

"Cool, thanks so much El I owe you!"

"haha no worries Liam, I cant wait!"

The phone was cut off and I told Louis about the secret date and how he was to meet the mystery girl at the park later in the evening. He agreed and went off the get ready, lets just hope it goes well!

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Louis P.O.V.

I had been set up with this girl? Liam said she was an old friend of his, I didnt want another irl, I was sure I wanted Jaz...

However I went off home to get ready and returned a few hours later to be told I had to head for the park? Thats where I was meeting her, I had to call her Eleanor, thats all I knew about her! It was practically a bind date...

I said goodbye to the boys and headed out to town towards the park. It was quite a cold evening so I have a big jacket and Jumper. After walking around 10 blocks I came up to the park. There was a slim pretty girl sitting on one of the swings, she was the only one in the park she I was guessing she was Eleanor. 

I walked up to her..."Eleanor?" I asked 

She turned around looking shocked, "Yes! You must be Louis" she said, her voice was like bells. Her hair was a beautiful rich brown and slightly wavy, her eyes were big and bright, she wore a bright pink jumper and light blue denim jeans along with converse. She was beautiful...

"Shall we walk on? I know a cafe a few blocks up, they do the best mocha?" She said, I could listen to her voice forever. 

"u-uh yeah! s-sounds good!" I managed to stutter.

"Great follow me, Bit chilly tonight" She said shivering and starting to walk on.

"It is isnt it...would you like my jacket?" I said feeling like a real gentleman.

"Oh Louis you dont have to do that!"

"No no, take it I'm not that cold anyway" I lied

"aww thank you Louis, really kind of you" She said flashing a dazzling smile

"Anytime!"

"Look heres the cafe!" She said indicating to a small cute shop on the edge of the road.

We walked him and sat down picking up the menu, "hmmm...Im going to go for a vanilla mocha!" I said while scanning the menu. 

"Ill have a...Hot chocolate, why not?" She said, I couldnt take my eyes off her. 

The waitress came round and brought us our drinks and we sipped in deep conversation. 

"So you like stripes right?!" She asked me actually sounding interested.

"Why yes I do! I love them! Ive always wanted to be a Zebra...thats why!" I said hoping I didnt sound to weird.

"Awww" she said laughing "I love animals!"

Just as we were talking about pets, I relised I hadnt thought about Jaz the whole night, I really liked El and she had completly taken my mind off her! It was going so well!

"Well I like this cafe! Im going to come here a lot more often...maybe with you? how about a second date?" I asked hoping I wasnt coming on too strong..

"I thought you'd never ask" she giggled

"How about a walk home?" I asked

"I'd love that" she whispered 

After that we walked home chatting about anything and everything. I really liked El and was so happy we'd be set up because I was only thinking of Jaz as a friend now, not a stupid crush...When we had got to Els house I gave her a goodbye kiss and we exchanged numbers and I went back to Liam and Jaz's flat.

When I got in, I flopped on the sofa with an overly happy sigh.

"Sooo...?" Liam asked me

"Li, I think this may be the start to and amazing relationship..."

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Liams P.O.V.

I was so happy for Louis and El they would be great together! Lets just hope no one ruins Niall and Jaz's relationship...

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OKAY guys, If you really want me to carry on please comment, I work my ass off doing these and no one tells me what they think so Im begging you, next I'm going to post and authors note okay? So please comment it would mean the world! 

OH and I know thats not how Lou and El met at all but this is my fanfic okaaaayaaa?

Love you guys!xoxox