NOTE THE BOOK COVER ARTWORK IS MINE I DREW IT FOR THIS BOOK
Most of the characters belong to rouge
The only characters that are mine are:
Erra
Tim
Stitch
And Jonathan
I hate this book btw it's so bad plus I added in something I didn't know a lot ab...
One. Just found out this story is eligible for the wattys
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Two. I am going to fully rewrite this book. I literally cannot edit it anymore and just going back through the chapters. So one I'm going to make a new book for this. It will be longer and much better. Erra and John will be in it but I'll get rid of Tim and Stitch. Erra and John have changed so much since I started this book and I just want to write their relationship better as well as have more of Suave x Jasper moments and not have Fallacy x Encre be so rushed. Plus I had Erra as Depressed and had a demon thing causing it but like I said she changed a lot and that won't be in the story. I also think Jasper came out more Whiny and childish so did Erra...oh god do I have a lot of things to change But I don't know how John will add up into the story since in his original story he's a serial killer (who turned into a killer bc of a drug...but that's another story) but I'll find a way. Oh and he's blond now. Anyway I want the story to be more focused on Fallacy and Encre and Suave and Jasper while Erra and John are in the background and mostly I just want the story to be better.
So please if you actually read The Whole thing and made it this far please give me other suggestions that aren't the ones I added that I should change in the story and yes the story will be much longer as well.
Thank you to all of my readers who have committed to reading this terrible book and commenting and voting on it as well. And now I'll give you a much better version but this one will stay up.
