Due to chapter management make sure to check chapter 6 which is the newest post! Just leaving here a quick note about some changes.
As you can notice I combined the first two chapters into one because they were too short and they were owning the same subject, Shane's arrival or change of residence. I changed the old chapters 4 and 5 ( that now are 3 and 4) I took out the 1st person part and added it in the following chapter.
Other than that there aren't too many changes (I'm usually editing to get rid of grammatical mistakes, typos and other errors which my friends notice, but those don't change the story or anything ). If I will ever consider changing something I will surely leave a note about it, especially if it's making a huge difference.
I'm sorry for the last week's lack of activity. I just had a lot of things going on in the week's ending which made me work everyday and barely gave me any time to write ( or do anything else besides school work).
Other than that, thank you a lot for reading/checking this story out or keeping up with reading it.
I would prefer to have more comments, negative, positive, it doesn't matter, as long as they are constructive and stating an opinion in a proper way. I can't fully rely on my friends' opinions, reason why I would like a total stranger's point of view.
Thank you anyways! The book will soon reach 600 views and I'm thrilled.
-Irina
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The Brothers of Sin-Black Blood
HorrorLeaving his ordinary life in order to meet Cassey, the so called "online lover", Shane Volz sets his new residence in a place that is not so known around the world. Despite her demise occurring before his arrival, he remains in order to attend the S...
