Opinion: Judge Angel

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Best.

Story.

Evar.

...next to Toby of course.

This surpassed Russian Sleep Experiment in my top 3 pastas.

Why?

Its a long story,

It has excellent grammar use and spelling,

Very good plot,

Excellent ending.

Its a story about a fricking girl with black eyes who is ignored by her father and held captive, yet she always looks at this sword that her father doesn't permit her to see. She ends up snapping when her father slapped her mother, and she got sent to the dungeon after trying to escape. She kills the maid because she found her guilty, and then grabs the sword and kills her father and grabs the body of her deceased mother and stuffs it into a suitcase and leaves.

What kind of story could ever be as fucking good as that.

Your right, none.

Its even so good I am making a fiction about it. I guess it would be a fictionfiction since its a fiction in the first place.

Oh well, theres my opinion, adios my Toby-os.

I nickname all my friends and followers my Toby's.

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