Story Critic | Closed For Now

THE INK PLAQUE

This one was a hard one. 

I mean, ARE YOU A PROFESSIONAL AUTHOR YET? because that book is professional.

You don't need to change much. Just a few minor things.

THE BAD

hard one. That's all I've got:

1: LONG chapters. Even though your writing's amazing, the chapters are long. In a paperback, that's okay but in digital it takes some effort for the readers. Don't change anything, just do this:

2: No space. When writing a digital book, there should be spaces. By that I mean lots of small paragraphs. You need to put lots of breaks (not too many) it keeps the reader going on even on long chapters.

3: Suspense. The story's great, but add in just a little bit of suspense. Just a little bit. Readers like the books with a lot of suspense. (adding 'space' as I call it - helps here)

THE GOOD

 Okay, where do I start?

 1: Well-developed characters. They have different personalities and have emotions. Great work here.

2: I loved the plot. It's amazing, and the story's fast-pacing. 

3: Un-put-downable. Seriously. Make it a paperback already. I need this masterpiece in my collection.

4: Overall it's amazing. well done.

RATING:

9.5 out of 10. That's the highest you can get. 

ADVICE:

 Make. it. a. book. in. real. life. NOW.

Don't stop writing!