This book, this one book, is just - beautiful.
THE GOOD:
1: Humor. Your story has some funny bits, and no matter what the genre is, everyone loves jokes.
2: The Plot. This book, this one book, is just.... I can't even........ I love it. I just love it. It deserves more than 80M views!
3: Characters. The characters, all of them, are given the same importance as the others. Sometimes writers just don't care much about the other characters expect the main characters, but you do.
4: Your vocabulary is marvelous. The words you use just fit perfectly.
5: I am digging the cover!
6: The blurb just fits perfectly.
THE BAD:
1: Long chapters. I did mention it before, but your chapters are long. Of course, It won't matter if it's the 3rd or 4th chapter, when the readers are into the book, but the first chapter should always be short.
2: Add a prologue. It's not important, of course, but if you add the prologue, it will help with the long chapters thing, because it can create suspense.
3: Pacing. Your story's pacing is slow at times, and other times it's too fast. Read it once again, and fix it up just a little bit.
UNIQUE CONCEPT FOR A BOOK
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Story Critic | Closed For Now
RandomHey guys! The title says it all. I can read your books for you and point out the goods and bads. Don't give up, keep writing!
